tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4659221976346043290.post2379633332599406942..comments2023-10-23T21:54:28.683+01:00Comments on Candice Hiu Fu Leung: online green light review 2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01539979029576641402noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4659221976346043290.post-46906884932296640172013-11-20T12:51:26.088+00:002013-11-20T12:51:26.088+00:00thank you phil :)thank you phil :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01539979029576641402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4659221976346043290.post-6012629801868099732013-11-20T11:59:34.470+00:002013-11-20T11:59:34.470+00:00OGR 20/11/2013
Hey Candice,
I'm getting in e...OGR 20/11/2013<br /><br />Hey Candice,<br /><br />I'm getting in early here, so thanks for posting your OGR so promptly. I think you're good to go into production - but I would suggest that you need to finesse your egg prop just a little more so; right now, they're looking totally organic as if they're actually eggs, when they're artificial containers - so I'd like to see you detail them - perhaps with some indication they've been manufactured, that they're canisters that can be opened. I'd like to see you think about giving them a few additional details that make them read as 'apparatus' as opposed to natural eggs. The other issue is lighting - because I think it could still get a little more dramatic - but this can be investigated in Maya I think. In terms of your computer console, I think this could still do with being punchier in terms colour - again - a sense of something more 'artificial' and 'high-tech' in this otherwise very natural world. Really looking forward to seeing you translate this into your digital set, Candice - onwards!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com