Hi Candice! Ok, firstly, be very careful with the title of this film...it is Alien in the singular :) 'Aliens' was the 1986 sequel... Make sure your quotes are in italics, and also any film titles. It's not really clear from your bibliography where your quote came from; was this a book, an article, another film review? This is why it is very important to make sure you reference everything thoroughly - if you are still not sure how to do it, grab me next time I am around and I'll show you :) In the meantime, have another look at the referencing guide here -
You also seem to have re-invented the poster tagline! - “ In space no one can hear you scream for the lines of the story'. I think maybe you cut and pasted something out of place here... :)
When you are referencing your images, you need a lot more information, such as the medium (was it a film still etc), the film name, the director etc. Again, the guide will show you how to do this - or just ask me!
I do think that you have made an interesting observation regarding the human construction of the spaceship and the strange structure of the alien :)
hi jackie , i found that article in Scholar but it havent shown me the references , so i click on quote and it given me ISOS so i dont really know how to do it :(
Hi Candice!
ReplyDeleteOk, firstly, be very careful with the title of this film...it is Alien in the singular :) 'Aliens' was the 1986 sequel...
Make sure your quotes are in italics, and also any film titles. It's not really clear from your bibliography where your quote came from; was this a book, an article, another film review? This is why it is very important to make sure you reference everything thoroughly - if you are still not sure how to do it, grab me next time I am around and I'll show you :) In the meantime, have another look at the referencing guide here -
http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/article/27187/Referencing
You also seem to have re-invented the poster tagline! - “ In space no one can hear you scream for the lines of the story'. I think maybe you cut and pasted something out of place here... :)
When you are referencing your images, you need a lot more information, such as the medium (was it a film still etc), the film name, the director etc. Again, the guide will show you how to do this - or just ask me!
I do think that you have made an interesting observation regarding the human construction of the spaceship and the strange structure of the alien :)
hi jackie , i found that article in Scholar but it havent shown me the references , so i click on quote and it given me ISOS so i dont really know how to do it :(
DeleteOkey dokey, next time you see me, show me where you found it and I'll see if I can work out what the reference would be :)
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