Wednesday, 11 December 2013

only god forgives 2013, Nicolas Winding Refn

1 comment:

  1. Hi Candice,

    Remember to italicise your film titles and the quotes. Talking of quotes, the one you have used by Nayman, seems to come to an abrupt end halfway through a sentence. It is important to end the quote in a suitable place, preferable at the end of a sentence, but if not, then as long as it still makes sense, you can put ... to signify that the rest is missing. Your quote could have looked like this,

    'The colors bleed across a wide spectrum of shades and tones gritty dusks and muted dawns...'

    Try and refer your text back to the images, so that you are using the image to support what you are writing. For example, if you are talking of clashing colours, you can say, 'as shown in figure 2'.