Good discussion on the use of colour throughout the film :) Be careful of using too many 'and's in a sentence; your first paragraph could have been broken up into smaller sentences, so that it doesn't read like a list.
Try and introduce your quotes via the authors name, rather than just dropping them in...you could say, for example,
As Spencer discusses in his article on film scores, 'Further enveloping the listener in a hellish atmosphere throughout the score are the wheezing, wailing, screaming, groaning voices of the band members....'(Spencer, 2008:279)
In your reference after the quote, the page number is separated from the date by a : not a 'P' for page.
Hi Candice,
ReplyDeleteGood discussion on the use of colour throughout the film :)
Be careful of using too many 'and's in a sentence; your first paragraph could have been broken up into smaller sentences, so that it doesn't read like a list.
Try and introduce your quotes via the authors name, rather than just dropping them in...you could say, for example,
As Spencer discusses in his article on film scores, 'Further enveloping the listener in a hellish atmosphere throughout the score are the wheezing, wailing, screaming, groaning voices of the band members....'(Spencer, 2008:279)
In your reference after the quote, the page number is separated from the date by a : not a 'P' for page.