Friday, 6 February 2015

Adaptation A : Submission

info graphics from hiu fu leung on Vimeo.

Voice Over : Jon Lovell

1 comment:

  1. Candice, my initial reaction to your infographic is that it is too long and has become visually underdeveloped – In short there was too much to do in such a short space of time. As a result your film has a rushed feel particularly when considering graphic design. Unfortunately there doesn’t seem to be a fixed ‘logic / approach’ at the heart of your design work. This shows in the variations of on screen content such as line drawings, silhouettes, and real photographs. The animation and transitions also lack a consistent methodology and clear planning working hard to keep up with the audio instead. The voiceover itself has silent pauses (edits?) which are confusing to follow. Whilst I want to congratulate you on trying something so ambitious I’d suggest finding something simpler in future work to allow you develop a clear design language.

    I’ve listed a few films below in order for you to see where perhaps you’ve made a mistake in your approach to where you may originate graphic designs…

    1950’s Boutique

    1950’s Sci-Fi

    Cartoon Science

    Chalk Board/ Menu /Farm