This is much better Candice! The second quote you use works particularly well to back up your discussion of the use of models for the sets.; you have also almost referenced them correctly within the text - the reference for 'Michael and Holger' should be their surnames, so 'Minden and Bachmann'
Just be aware that when you compile your bibliography, the names go in reverse, so it would be Elsaesser, T. and Minden, M. and Bachman, H.
Be careful too, to put the name of the film in italics within the text, and make sure the book tiles in the bibliography are italicised too.
This is much better Candice!
ReplyDeleteThe second quote you use works particularly well to back up your discussion of the use of models for the sets.; you have also almost referenced them correctly within the text - the reference for 'Michael and Holger' should be their surnames, so 'Minden and Bachmann'
Just be aware that when you compile your bibliography, the names go in reverse, so it would be Elsaesser, T. and Minden, M. and Bachman, H.
Be careful too, to put the name of the film in italics within the text, and make sure the book tiles in the bibliography are italicised too.
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