Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Edward scissorhands 1990- Tim Burton film review


  1. Hi Candice. I like how you compared this film to a film we watched previously. But you got the title of that film incorrect. It is La Belle et la Bête (1946) and I think you should italicize the film title and not put in quotation marks :)

  2. Hi Candice!
    Ayunie beat me to it :) Be very careful with your spellings...

    Also, I am not quite sure how that last quote is being referenced - is it someone quoting someone else in a book? If that is the case, it is called 'secondary referencing' - have a look at the referencing guide again, to see how you do it.

    In your bibliography, you also have a spelling mistake - you have put 'assessed' which means 'tested' instead of 'accessed'.